100 word challenge

By Anonymous -
We were moving very fast until the car came to a screeching halt. My body swung forward as I tried to grab poppy as she wasn’t in her cage.Mum jumps out of the car and me and poppy follow. When she opened the bonnet a cloud of smoke came rushing out. Poppy started barking and the smoke made my throat dry and a strong urge to cough came to my mind. My mum had a puzzled face and grabbed out her phone ready to dial for someone to pickup our car. 20 minutes later we see a pickup truck.

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  1. Anonymous16 February 2018 at 23:20

    Ohh, I like the way you have chosen words to add imagery to your writing e.g. screeching halt. You have also used precise nouns that give the reader additional information. Well done.

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